No, it is not only our fate but our business to lose innocence, and once we have lost that, it is futile to attempt a picnic in Eden.
Dialogue must appear realistic without being so. Actual realism-the lifting, as it were, of passages from a stenographer's take-down of a 'real life' conversation-would be disruptive. Of what? Of the illusion of the novel. In 'real life' everything is diluted; in the novel everything is condensed.
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What this quote means
This quote emphasizes the importance of crafting dialogue in literature to create a believable narrative, as true-to-life conversations can disrupt the artistic illusion of a novel.
Elizabeth Bowen discusses the art of dialogue in novels, asserting that while realism in dialogue may reflect actual speech, it can actually undermine the crafted illusion of narrative. In contrast to the diluted nature of real-life conversations, a novel's dialogue is meant to be condensed, focused, and carefully constructed to enhance the storytelling and overall impact on the reader.
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In a writing workshop, a participant shares this quote to highlight the importance of crafted dialogue.
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